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    The story of Bellower, greentext version

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    >living in the north with my people
    >cold and lacks food
    >still manageable
    >population grows
    >people naturally wander south
    >no snow here, nice
    >we do have a problem with these bulky bearded demons, call themselves varl
    >they dont wanna share their lands
    >my people are starving, start stealing food from the demons
    >demons start killing those who trespass
    >jeez guys chill for a bit, we are leaving
    >they dont stop
    >they start a systematic genocide of my people
    >a small group of my people lives on and reproduces
    >we really hate the demon dudes
    >decide to retaliate
    >im really tall so i get this awesome red armor
    >the demons ally with tiny dudes with no horns
    >while defenceless, my wife and infant child are brutally executed by blond demon
    >im devastated
    >still, keep fighting
    >fight for like, 80 years
    >goddamn wizards use cheap tactics to win the war
    >we are all driven back to the barren north
    >occasionally wander south to try and gather food
    >demons drive us back to the north over and over
    >give up and decide to keep struggling with limited resources in the cold
    >one day, the very fabric of space ceases to exist near our encampment
    >the purple void grows every day
    >it doesnt look pretty
    >either get eaten by the void or fight the demons
    >fight obv
    >with nothing to lose, fight goes better than usual
    >face off with demon on a bridge
    >its the guy who murdered my family
    >show him that im more merciful than him, only cut off his arm rather than killing him
    >hope he will learn a lesson
    >we find a big city with lots of food, sweet
    >a small group of enemies face us, good thing i cant die
    >apparently i can die
    >man i just died
    >wow being dead is really boring
    >okay so now im not dead anymore
    >but im in a demon body now
    >wtf
    >try to convince his peers that my people arent evil
    >meet blond demon once more
    >he still wants us all dead
    >okay that does it
    >tower collapses on my head because of some wizard politics
    >still hungry
    Last edited by Frown; 08-25-2017 at 10:34 AM.

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    Hahaha, still laughing from this one Now, that's an interesting alternative plot-line for the game... But people will say he's too OP to play :P
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    This is genius! Well done, Frown!
    I love the section of him being dead And where he's tall, so he's given red armor.
    Awesome read.

    I expect other POV are in the works?

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    Good one! "because of some wizard politics" ..... and then "still hungry" - classic

    It is also quite interesting since Bellower is one of the key characters, but we never get his point-of-view (I still wonder how much of a society Dredge have...).

    It also made me day-dream about greentext narratives for characters like Tryggvi, Canari and those Kragsmen....xD

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